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Grammar, Spelling Errors and Awkward Sentences
MasterofidiotsPosted: Aug 09, 2008 @ 15:00
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In this topic, please post any Grammatical Errors, Spelling Mistakes or Awkward Sentences you find in any of our analyses. Just post the link to the analysis.

This is for any member that hasn't reached the post plateau and wishes for someone to change the mistake.
This is also for changes in wording, which will be added upon agreement of the members of TLF

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FlounderPosted: Aug 09, 2008 @ 15:05
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http://libelldra.com/competitive/analyses/read/243/raikou/

The first... wall of text... has a some minor grammar issues and awkward wording.

Quote: Raikou, one of the few pure usable Electric Type Pokemon. Raikou's electric typing gives it 1 weakness, Ground and a resistance to Flying, Electric, and Steel


It should read:

Quote: Raikou, one of the few usable pure Electric Type Pokemon. Raikou's electric typing gives it 1 weakness, Ground, and a resistance to Flying, Electric, and Steel.
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MasterofidiotsPosted: Aug 09, 2008 @ 15:11
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okay, fixed
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AnthonyPosted: Aug 09, 2008 @ 15:12
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Please don't, that's what comments on the analyses themselves is for. Please don't put things that can be posted outside the forums in the forums.
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